Monday, October 25, 2010

Love Through the Clearing



Hair that flows like the ocean

Every intention to flow with the notion of your motions

The commotion quickening my locomotion

I feel drunk of your potion

A concoction of your adoption

Adopting meanings and understandings

From a girl who is not demanding

Love is not commanding, and requires no mandate

You're beautiful, compatible, a candidate

And I would like to state

That you have this power to create

Don't wait, bring life to that which is innate

Give it meanings to anyone who chooses to relate

Having eyes that don't deny

That you have tried many times

To answer and question all your whys

I am here for you and wont speak a lie

I am not afraid to die

Your breath and essence fill my being

As you take away my confidence I am finally seeing

Love through the clearing


Its hard to focus in my English class, all I can think about is every word I want to use for expression. I'm always rhyming words with emotions and understandings I feel no one understands, but I put them in my poetry for people to understand. I dont want to be cliche and say that I allow for my readers to interpret. I try to give them the blatant truth through words that can only be comprehended by ones who understand experience.

My whole intention behind this poem was to show feelings I have for this new girl who I have taken interest in. No need for names yet, and I'd like to keep it that way for now.

Have a Good One.

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