Monday, October 25, 2010
Love Through the Clearing
Hair that flows like the ocean
Every intention to flow with the notion of your motions
The commotion quickening my locomotion
I feel drunk of your potion
A concoction of your adoption
Adopting meanings and understandings
From a girl who is not demanding
Love is not commanding, and requires no mandate
You're beautiful, compatible, a candidate
And I would like to state
That you have this power to create
Don't wait, bring life to that which is innate
Give it meanings to anyone who chooses to relate
Having eyes that don't deny
That you have tried many times
To answer and question all your whys
I am here for you and wont speak a lie
I am not afraid to die
Your breath and essence fill my being
As you take away my confidence I am finally seeing
Love through the clearing
Its hard to focus in my English class, all I can think about is every word I want to use for expression. I'm always rhyming words with emotions and understandings I feel no one understands, but I put them in my poetry for people to understand. I dont want to be cliche and say that I allow for my readers to interpret. I try to give them the blatant truth through words that can only be comprehended by ones who understand experience.
My whole intention behind this poem was to show feelings I have for this new girl who I have taken interest in. No need for names yet, and I'd like to keep it that way for now.
Have a Good One.
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